It had been one of those long, draining days that leave you wishing you could simply teleport home. Claire boarded the evening train with her bag slung over one shoulder, her steps heavy but eager for rest. Outside, the sun was setting, painting the sky with soft streaks of orange and pink. The light filtered through the windows, casting a golden glow over the carriage, as if trying to soothe weary commuters with its gentle warmth.
Claire found an empty seat and settled in, letting out a breath she hadn’t realized she was holding. For a moment, she let herself enjoy the silence, the rhythm of the train clattering along the tracks, the fading chatter of passengers.
But then she noticed him.
A man sitting across from her, his eyes fixed squarely on her.
There was nothing outwardly menacing about his face. His expression was calm, almost unreadable. Yet his gaze never shifted, never softened. It was the kind of stare that made your skin prickle, the kind that sets off an instinct deep inside—a quiet voice whispering, Something isn’t right.
Claire looked away, telling herself not to overthink it. Maybe he was lost in thought. Maybe he wasn’t even looking at her at all. But every time she dared another glance, his eyes were there, steady and unblinking.
The unease in her chest grew heavier with every passing minute.
A Sudden Decision
As the train rattled on, Claire tried to calm her thoughts. Don’t be paranoid, she told herself. But the feeling wouldn’t leave. Her hands gripped her bag tighter.
When the announcement for the next stop came, she made a snap decision. Though it wasn’t her station, she would get off early. Something in her gut told her it was safer that way.
She gathered her belongings quickly, almost too quickly, as if the man would notice her sudden urgency. Rising to her feet, she moved toward the doors. Just before stepping off, instinct made her glance back.
The man was still watching her.
Her pulse quickened as the doors closed behind her. The train pulled away, carrying him into the distance. She exhaled, a shaky breath of both relief and confusion. What had just happened? Was she imagining danger where none existed?
